一、引子 老朱昨日讲座讲作文的要求: 第一,切题。包含提纲提示,图表、漫画所提供的或者暗示的全部问题。接着按所得到的提示去改造之。 第二,句式变化要多一些。 第三,用词面要宽一些。 第四,语法要正确,如主谓一致、谓语动词的时态、语态、及物与不及物、搭配关系等。
先用3——4分钟把提纲看懂,看提纲要求、提纲与图表、漫画之间的关系,弄清楚出题忍让咱做吗!然后,构思(组织题材)。马上拿出答题纸,起草成文,起草与成文要一气呵成!
二、短文写作的类型
(一)、提纲式作文 A Title :Competition and Cooperation B Time limit: 45 minutes C World limit :about 200 words (not including the opening sentence) D Your composition should be based on the Outline below and should start with the given opening sentence: “competition is a common phenomenon in our society.” E Your composition must be written clearly on ANSWER SHEET2
OUTLINE: 1 competition a common phenomenon in our society 2 relationship between competition and cooperation 3 your opinion on competition and cooperation
COMPETITION AND COOPERATION Competition is a common phenomenon in our society . We compete when we play games, we try to do better than others in our study, and there is constant competition for jobs, fame, wealth and so forth. Therefore,we can say that, in a certain sense, competition is one of the motive forces of the development of our modern society.
It is often believed, however ,that competition and cooperation are in opposition to each other. Some people stress competition, without which, in their eyes, there is no responsibility , no drive and ultimately, no progress. Others advocate cooperation whatever they do. They are of the opinion that the dependence of people on one another has increased, without which the society we live in cannot keep going smoothly. In reality, we find that in many cases competition goes hand in hand with cooperation. Let’s take a football game for example. During the game, one team is competing against the other, but each member of the team must cooperate with his teammates. Otherwise, the此文共有4页 上一页 1 2 3 4 下一页 |